金庸《鹿鼎记》英译本面貌研究

    A Study of the Textual Profile of The Deer and the Cauldron

    • 摘要: 基于译者序、书信、会议发言、报刊文章、访谈、档案等一手文献,以生成翻译学为视角,结合译本、原作中英文本比读,融合跨文化视域逼近历史译本的生成过程及其内在逻辑,从底本、译者、分工、形态、策略五方面厘清学界关于《鹿鼎记》译本被忽略或未及深究的诸多问题:译本底本是修订版《鹿鼎记》;霍克思、闵福德、梅瑞琦三人共同形塑了译本;译本三册形态不一,第一册为全译本、第二册为萃译本、第三册为缩译本;译者英译时迁移其《红楼梦》英译“讲一个生动故事”的成功经验,运用形貌修辞、诗歌押韵和文内添译并倚重叙事改写策略重构跨文化叙事模式,围绕韦小宝为西方读者讲述了一个精彩的武侠故事。

       

      Abstract: Drawing on first-hand sources—including translators’ prefaces, personal correspondence, conference presentations, newspaper articles, previously unexamined interview records, and archival documents—this paper adopts the perspective of genetic translation studies and, through a comparative reading of the translated text against its Chinese original, integrates a cross-cultural lens to reconstruct, as closely as possible, the genesis of the historical translation and its underlying logic. By examining the source text, the translators, the division of translation labor, the textual configuration, and the translation strategies employed, the study clarifies a number of issues concerning the English translation of Ludingji that have hitherto been overlooked or insufficiently examined in existing scholarship. It demonstrates that the source text underlying the translation is the revised edition of Ludingji; that David Hawkes, John Minford, and Rachel May jointly shaped the translation; and that the three volumes of The Deer and the Cauldron differ markedly in form, with Volume One constituting a complete translation, Volume Two a selective translation, and Volume Three an abridged translation. The study further argues that, in translating the novel, the translators drew on the successful experience of “telling a vivid story” gained from their earlier translation of The Story of the Stone (Hongloumeng), reconstructing a cross-cultural narrative mode through morphological rhetoric, rhymed verse translation, and in-text explicitation, while relying primarily on narrative rewriting strategies—ultimately crafting, around the figure of Trinket, a captivating martial arts tale for English-language readers.

       

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